Becky Thwaites A2 media coursework
Tuesday 14 September 2010
Proposal Feedback
Good start however I need more detail on the actual story (the narrative) and how it will develop. So how does it start? What happens in the middle and how does it end? Redraft for Mon 4th please.
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