Friday 24 September 2010

Essay 1 feedback

High level 3 - High C/Low B
This essay presents a clear understanding of the question and you have adjusted your answer accordingly. You clearly understand the theories and can use contemporary examples to support your points. You have structured your essay clearly to provide elements of both arguments. You need to engage on a more personal level with the question in order to get a level 4/A. This would mean adding something different - a new angle or an example of your own for instance.

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